Author Interview—Darby Harn

As fortune would have it, I shared a book signing table with Darby Harn, one of the guests of honor at ICON 49.5 earlier this month. Beginners like me can learn about selling books from watching a more experienced writer like Darby. In the interview below, you’ll read how his writing career stalled at one point, but he persevered. From that experience, he offers two profound words of advice—two—for aspiring authors.

Bio

Darby Harn is the best-selling, critically acclaimed author of Dead Malls, Stargun Messenger, a Self Published Science Fiction Contest Quarterfinalist, and Ever The Hero, which Publisher’s Weekly called an “entertaining debut that uses superpowers as a metaphor to delve into class politics in an alternate America.” His fiction appears in Strange Horizons, Interzone, Fantasy Magazine, and more. He is a panelist, moderator, and programmer, designing a variety of content modules for conventions, including his One Hour Short Story Workshop, featured at several major cons. He graduated from the University of Iowa and is an alum of the Irish Writing Program at Trinity College in Dublin, Ireland.

Interview

Poseidon’s Scribe: How did you get started writing? What prompted you?

Darby Harn: I don’t remember not writing. I was writing and drawing little comics at the dining room table when I was three. I just always wanted to tell stories and share them.

P.S.: Who are some of your influences? What are a few of your favorite books? 

D.H.: Star Wars is probably the single biggest influence in terms of what it did to my toddler brain but also how it inspired me to explore myth, anthropology, and the literature that inspired it. I don’t know about favorite books. How do you choose? My favorite writers include Seamus Heaney, Virginia Woolf, Chris Claremont, Michael Cunningham, Kelly Link, and so many more.

P.S.: In your book Stargun Messenger, your protagonist sounds fascinating. Tell us about her.

D.H.: Astra Idari is an android bounty hunter who pursues thieves of starship fuel. When Idari discovers that the fuel comes from the blood of living stars, her entire moral universe is upended.

P.S.: As a frequent book reviewer for FanFiAddict, please tell us about that site and why you review books by others.

D.H.: FanFiAddict is a great resource and community for sci-fi and fantasy reviews from trad to indie. My mom died in September, and I am really slacking in my contributions. I owe some people a lot, especially my thanks.

P.S.: Our sympathies about the death of your mom. Since shopping malls are dying around the country, Dead Malls seems an apropos title. Give us the premise of this novel. Is it really a choose-your-own adventure?

D.H.: CYOA is an element of the book, and it creeps up on you, getting super twisty, and I hope super fun. The book is about Sam, a security guard at a dying mall just trying to get through their shift. One night, they discover an intruder in the mall who claims to be the only survivor of a nuclear war that happened in 1983. Then things get weird.

P.S.: Sounds fascinating! It appears you got your start writing short stories and moved to novels. If true, why the change, and if not, tell us about your experiences with the various forms (lengths) of fiction and how your fiction has evolved.

D.H.: I was always primarily a long-form storyteller, but I came up while short stories were still the primary route into traditional publishing. You sell a few stories, get noticed hopefully, and get a book deal. That’s what happened to me in the early 2000s, though it got very messy after that.

I sold my first novel in 2006, and it was 2011 before I realized it was never going to come out. The entire experience derailed my life and career. I was so stymied I didn’t finish a novel between 2007 and 2015. For a long time, I didn’t think I would.

P.S.: Sorry you had that experience, but glad you wrote your way out of it. Your book, Ever the Hero, begins the Eververse series. Please tell us about this introductory book and premise, and world(s) of Eververse.

D.H.: Ever The Hero is what happens when you don’t pay your superhero bill. In this world, if you can’t afford them, they don’t help. Kit Baldwin is a regular person trying to get through the day. She gets powers, wants to help others, but it’s illegal; they make you pay. This leads to a huge conflict over who owes what to whom.

P.S.: Is there a common attribute that ties your fiction together (genre, character types, settings, themes) or are you a more eclectic author?

D.H.: I think the defining aspect of my writing is its elasticity. I’m a mashup of a lot of different interests and inspirations, ranging from Marvel Comics to Irish poetry. That results in genre fiction, which tends toward the poetic and the literary.

P.S.: We’ll get to your Ireland connection in a moment. First, you’re not serious about writing a short story in an hour, are you? Tell us about your workshop.

D.H.: The most common question I get is ‘Where do I start?’ After that, it’s usually ‘How do I get unstuck?’ My One-Hour Short Story Workshop is a way for aspiring writers to kickstart their stories by focusing on the beginning, middle, and end of a short story, having them write to a prompt, share, and hopefully leave the experience with the foundations of a story. It’s a joy to watch people create in real-time. I’ve conducted the workshop at major cons, including Twin Cities Con, GalaxyCon, and others.

P.S.: You seem to prefer places beginning with “I”—Iowa and Ireland. Did your time in the Emerald Isle inspire your book A Country of Eternal Night?

D.H.: A Country of Eternal Light doesn’t exist without Ireland. While I was a student at Trinity College in Dublin, I visited the Aran Islands. Like so many others, I was transfixed with the place. I always wanted to go back. Cut to twelve years later or so, my dad had died, I’m not writing anything, and I’m miserable in my very well-paying job. So, in 2014, I quit, moved to Ireland, and returned to the islands. The experience unlocked what became Country, and my career today.

P.S.: It sounds like Ireland inspired more than just one book! What is your current work in progress? Would you mind telling us a little about it?

D.H.: I have a few things going on right now, but progress is pretty slow. Next up on deck is the third book in the Stargun Messenger trilogy, followed by Eververse Book 5.

Poseidon’s Scribe: What advice can you offer aspiring authors?

Darby Harn: Never quit.

Poseidon’s Scribe: Thank you, Darby. The most succinct writing advice ever given.

Web Presence

Readers can discover more about Darby Harn on his website, and at Goodreads, Amazon, Facebook, and Instagram.

Author Interview—Jan S. Gephardt

I met Jan Gephardt two years ago at Demicon, the scifi conference in Des Moines. Since then, she often reposted my Facebook posts and read my blog. She even made a great Poseidon’s Scribe image for me, which I’ll show in a future post. That’s a real fan! About time I got around to interviewing her. In this interview, you’ll learn why she started her own publishing company, and how she’s made uplifted dogs the stars of her books. Here’s her bio: 

Bio

Jan S. Gephardt (pronouns: she/her) is a science fiction novelist, fantasy artist, publisher, and longtime science fiction fan from Kansas City.

Her XK9s Saga books feature a pack of uplifted police dogs. Her XK9 “Bones” Trilogy consists of What’s Bred in the Bone, A Bone to Pick, and Bone of Contention. The Other Side of Fear is a prequel novella. She’s now at work on a fourth XK9 novel, Bones for the Children.

Her stories are set in a far-future science fiction world, where the XK9s solve crimes and sniff out bad guys while seeking recognition of their own sapience. They live in a space station (inhabited by humans and several other sapient species) in a different star’s planetary system.

She and sister G. S. Norwood co-founded Weird Sisters Publishing LLC in 2019, after G.’s death in September 2024, her son Tyrell E. Gephardt joined the partnership.

She has exhibited her fantasy artwork at sf conventions since 1981. Since 2007 she’s developed a unique paper sculpture technique. Her artwork also has been featured in regionally-exhibited one-person shows, and juried into mainstream national exhibitions all over the United States. She’s a member and former officer of the Association of Science Fiction and Fantasy Artists (ASFA).

Interview

Poseidon’s Scribe: How did you get started writing science fiction?

Jan S. Gephardt: Science fiction was always kind of “there” all my life – one of the reading and viewing options. My first conscious memory of any kind of science fiction was a Saturday morning puppet show on TV called Fireball XL5 that I watched when I was in grade school. For anyone who knows, by that statement I have just revealed that I really am older than dirt.

I read voraciously the whole time I was growing up, and I started writing stories before I actually could read and write: I dictated a story to my mother at age four, and illustrated it with crayons. It was a tale of the adventures of a horse and a black cat who went in search of something, but I forget what. The important part, for me, was their journey and how they talked each other through problems. There are, of course, no themes there that relate to my later work (unless you count talking animals; a black animal; collaborative cooperation, adventure, mutual respect . . . )

P.S.: I doubt the “older than dirt” claim, but, moving on. Who are some of your influences? What are a few of your favorite books? 

J.S.G.: Early influences? Anything illustrated by Leo & Diane Dillon, and The Chronicles of Prydain, by Lloyd Alexander. My sister and I would walk four blocks to our local bookstore to buy each new book when it came out. Then we’d take turns reading it to our mother.

Later, I was influenced by a wide variety of stories in a broad range of genres, from Regency romances by Georgette Heyer to mysteries by Mary Stewart, to sf by Heinlein, Asimov, and Poul Anderson. Can’t leave out fantasy, either. My Tolkien craze lasted quite a while. And of course I watched Star Trek, and later Star Wars (in movie theaters.)

My favorite books? You mean other than my own? (I confess, I do like what I write). But you probably mean by other people. Wow, there are so many!

In the past decade I’ve been reading a lot of what one might call “K9 Mysteries.” Probably my top favorite writer in that group is Margaret Mizushima, although I also follow Kathleen Donelly, Sara Driscoll, and Jodi Burnett.

Can’t get away from the mystery genre without also professing my love for Louise Penny and Deborah Crombie (the fact that Deb was my late sister’s best friend has nothing to do with my enjoyment of her Kincaid and James series. She writes a really good mystery!).

I’ve been loving the Legends & Lattes series by Travis Baldree in the fantasy field. I also enjoy the Innkeeper Chronicles by Ilona Andrews – they’re technically science fiction, but they read a lot like fantasy. I was charmed by the first Becky Chambers book, The Long Way to a Small, Angry Planet. I thoroughly enjoyed Lindsay Buroker’s Star Kingdom series. I’m currently re-reading War for the Oaks by Emma Bull. I’d forgotten what a wonderful book that is.

I’ve also recently been fascinated by a trio of nonfiction books that really unlock a lot of understanding about why our world works as it currently does. They are: Why Nations Fail, by Daron Acemoglu and James A. Robinson; The Wolves of K Street, by Brody Mullins and Luke Mullins; and Survival of the Richest, by Douglas Rushkoff. They explain so much!

P.S.: Tell us about your company, Weird Sisters Publishing. Sorry about the loss of two of its founding members, but it’s great news that your son has joined.

J.S.G.: Thanks. My sister Gigi (yes, the one who used to trek to the bookstore with me for Lloyd Alexander books) and I formed the company in 2019, about 14 years after the “third, honorary Weird Sister,” my late brother-in-law, Warren C. Norwood, had died.

When we created the company, I had just finished my first novel, What’s Bred in the Bone. I was looking at the pros and cons of trying to get traditionally published, but I could also try to “go Indie,” or become part of an author collective.

Gigi and I looked at her big pile of unpublished books, and at Warren’s backlist, to which Gigi had the publishing rights, and my ambitions for the XK9 books. We decided we could form a closely-held family LLC, our own little author collective, focused on only selling our own books.

So, that’s what we did. We called it Weird Sisters Publishing for several reasons. Gigi was a theatre major in college where she specialized in Shakespeare for her BFA. Also, we’d been fantasy and folklore geeks. Of course we knew about the Wyrd Sisters, the Three Norns, the Fates, and all their other incarnations. Plus, when we were growing up we were always the nerdy girls with the big vocabularies and the “encyclopedia brains.” We knew we were often looked at as “those weird sisters.” All in all, it seemed like a natural.

P.S.: Weird Sisters Publishing offers books by you, your sister, and (I believe) her husband. How do the three authors’ styles, genres, and subjects differ? Are there similarities?

J.S.G.: Well, we’re working on getting Warren’s books back into print. When Gigi died suddenly in September, 2024, the rights to his literary property reverted jointly to his daughter Margaret and the D.M. Willis Library of the North Texas University.

The Willis Library has a collection devoted to Texas writers that they’ve been building around Warren’s papers. When Gigi died my legal right to publish Warren’s work went “poof.” Lucky for me, Margaret and a representative for the Willis Library have verbally expressed enthusiasm for seeing Warren’s work back in print. I have long believed his books deserved a better fate than to be backlisted and then forgotten.

Most of Gigi’s finished novels were written in the 1990s, and they were supposed to be what we would today call “spicy” romances. However, romance publishers consistently declined to buy her intricately plotted, cleverly crafted stories about young women finding their true self-worth while also discovering and establishing mutually satisfying relationships with their life partners. One of the great joys of my life was bringing Deep Ellum Duet, a collection of Gigi’s first two “Deep Ellum” novelettes, into print as a book. Deep Ellum Duet was the only printed book with her byline that she got to see and hold in her lifetime.

P.S.: You’re not only a writer, but an artist as well, with a gallery of beautiful and evocative artwork. Do the two interests—art and writing—intersect, or do you keep them separate?

J.S.G.: Oh, golly. For a long time I tried to figure out “what am I going to be? A writer or an artist?” I never did decide. My undergraduate major was art with an emphasis in printmaking, and a heavy side of what we used to call “commercial art,” now called graphic design.

While I studied art, I also got a teaching degree. I came out of college in 1976 (yes, older than dirt) with teaching certificates in art K-12 and journalism 7-12. Just about the time I thought I’d settled into doing “mainly art” or “mainly writing,” a new door would open and all at once I’d be mostly doing the other. Thus, I’ve done a lot of marketing – both writing and graphic design work – teaching, and I had a brief career in journalism. The range of skill sets I developed has helped me a lot with my work for Weird Sisters.

I was originally a pen-and-ink artist, a proclivity that fit well with my intaglio printmaking emphasis in college. I’ve shown my 2D science fiction and fantasy artwork at science fiction conventions since the early 1980s. The paper sculpture came later, sparked by a “pop-up book” assignment I did with my art students. I showed my paper sculpture in national and international juried exhibitions, and I had several solo shows regionally.

The “art work” that currently fuels my passion is commissioning illustrations. After all my years in sf fandom, including participating on all those art-related panels, showing my work alongside that of other artists, and working as an officer of ASFA, the International Association of Science Fiction and Fantasy Artists, I have become friends with a lot of marvelous illustrators. I love collaborating with them on both covers and interior art.

P.S.: How did you come to write about uplifted space dogs? Did you or do you have a dog of your own that inspired the idea?

J.S.G.: My books are built from my lifelong fascination with animals, animal intelligence, multiple cultures (my master’s degree is in multicultural education), future technology and societies, and mystery stories. I’ve had dogs all my life (lots of cats, too). Anymore, I tell my husband that “Professionally, I need to have a dog.”

It’s true that I regularly get inspiration from my current two, just as I have from all of their predecessors. Current canines in residence are an Australian Kelpie mix named Yoshi and one of Gigi’s dogs, an older Border Collie mix named Kata. My lifetime spent around dogs, plus recent research into canine cognition, fueled my invention of the “XK9s,” who are genetically engineered and cyber-enabled for communication.

P.S.: Is Rex the main canine character in all the XK9 books? What breed is Rex, and are his packmates of the same breed?

J.S.G.: XK9s are their own special breed. According to the story, they were developed from all the wonderful working and hunting breeds we know today. They have characteristics of Border Collies, German Shepherds, Belgian Malinois, Dutch Shepherds, Bloodhounds, Labrador Retrievers, Golden Retrievers, and many more. Many of my readers have dogs (including some who have one or more of the aforementioned breeds), and I imagine they recognize elements of their favorite breeds in some of the things the XK9s do.

Rex is officially the protagonist of the XK9 “Bones” Trilogy, the first three novels. But you could argue that his mate Shady rivals him for “primacy” as the protagonist, especially in the second and third books, A Bone to Pick and Bone of Contention. As to who is the “top dog” in the book I’m currently writing? That’s probably Shady, although Rex and a new XK9, a refugee from Transmondia, are both viewpoint characters, too.

I recently learned that Kirkus Reviews will publish the Starred Review of my book Bone of Contention in the Dec.1, 2025 issue. That’s perhaps not a major literary prize, but they don’t just hand those out to any old body, especially not to Indies.

P.S.: Congratulations on that upcoming review! You’ve put a lot of thought into your space station’s design. Please describe Rana Station—where it is, what it looks like, and how it functions as the setting for your books.

J.S.G.: Rana Habitat Space Station is a space-based megastructure consisting of eight habitat wheels that counter-rotate in pairs to produce normal gravity for their inhabitants.

It occupies the L4 (LaGrange) point of the planet Chayko in an extrasolar system somewhere we haven’t discovered yet in Heritage Earth Year 2025. Rana Station was largely constructed using materials mined from M- and C-class Chayko trojans that had previously orbited in the L4 point where the station now has its own stable orbit.

Rana Station is also is the home of a multicultural, indeed, multi-species, society. It was jointly founded by a group of idealistic humans and a refugee subculture from a species called ozzirikkians. Neither could have created the station without the other. The ozzies” have their own two habitat wheels, calibrated to artificially create gravity compatible with ozzirikkian evolution, just as the human wheels centrifugally create 1G.

Rana Station is a fabulous place to raise your kids, but they still have crime. They still have politics. And they still need a police force. I did not “abolish” the Orangeboro Police Department (home of “The Orangeboro Pack”), but it does differ in some key ways from what we’re used to in our world.

P.S.: Regarding the XK9 trilogy, you’ve got three novels and a prequel novella. Will you be writing more in this series or starting something different?

J.S.G.: Oh, you bet I’ll be writing more in this series! Neither I nor my readers are tired of the XK9s yet! In fact, it’s humbling to realize how long and patiently they’re willing to wait for each new book. I’m almost finished with a fourth XK9 novel, Bones for the Children, and I have plans firming up for several more. As long as people keep buying them and I stay healthy, I’m not likely to run out of ideas. There are so many rich veins of possibility that I haven’t yet explored!

P.S.: Tell us more about Bones for the Children, at least what you can reveal.

J.S.G.: As noted above, it’s another XK9 novel, set a couple of months after the end of the Trilogy. As with all of these novels, it’s kind of an “ensemble cast.” Lots of moving parts, in other words.

There are six viewpoint characters, each with their own storyline and challenges in their own personal life. Rex, his human partner Charlie, Shady, and her partner Pam are all POV characters again in this one. But there also are two new viewpoints: those of OPD Chief Kwame Klein, and a new XK9 named See, who’s led a very different life from the ones Rex, Shady, and the rest of the Orangeboro Pack have had.

There’s a new mystery to solve in this book – or rather, a nested set of mysteries, wrapped up in a public safety crisis and complicated by a long history of political corruption and criminal enterprise. So, fun stuff! And loads of fun to write.

Poseidon’s Scribe: What advice can you offer aspiring writers?

Jan S. Gephardt: If you write, you’re a writer – no “aspiring” to it. But to be an aspiring professional, learn the craft and then persist. Put in those 10,000 hours of learning and growing and practicing the art and honing your skills. All through that process and long after it, don’t stop writing. Keep doing it, keep learning, keep putting your work out there. Be patient. Be humble. And don’t stop writing.

Poseidon’s Scribe: Thank you, Jan. Great advice!

Web Presence

Readers and all dog lovers can find out more about Jan Gephardt at her website, her publishing company’s website, her Amazon page, her Goodreads Author Page, her Facebook Author Page, her Facebook Artdog Studio Page, her Facebook Weird Sisters Page, and on Instagram, and Bluesky. Jan blogs at her art studio and at The Weird Blog on her publishing site. You may sign up for her bi-monthly newsletter, and get a free ebook, The Other Side of Fear.

8 Ways to Build Self-Discipline in Writing, or in Anything

Writing requires self-discipline. If you lack that, can you develop it? Let’s find out.

I’ve blogged about discipline before, but that post discussed its importance. Today, I’ll tell you how to increase your self-discipline.

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Definition

For this blogpost, self-discipline means your ability to control your behavior and actions to achieve your writing goals. This requires you to suppress immediate desires and ignore distractions, to make conscious choices to do what is necessary, even when that’s difficult.

Eight Skills

I found inspiration from this post by Zen advocate and blogger Leo Babauta. However, I’ve reworded his points and focused on their application to writing. Even so, if you practice these skills, you’ll strengthen your self-discipline in general, not just as a writer.

1. Write regardless of your mood

If you wait until you’re in the mood to write, you’ll wait forever. We find it easier to procrastinate than to do what we need to do. Gain mastery over this tendency. Sit in the chair and write.

2. Make time to exercise

Being a sedentary activity, writing for long periods without exercise can weaken your body. In the long run, you’ll write many more years if you keep in shape. You might find it beneficial to set a timer, take a break from writing, and perform light exercises before writing again. Try the Pomodoro technique: twenty-five minutes of focused writing and five minutes of mild exercise.

3. Write hungry

Break or avoid starting the habit of eating while writing. Write first, eat later. Let your stomach grumble awhile. It’s not your boss. Food will wait for you.

4. Have the difficult conversations

Many people, even writers, avoid or put off disagreeable confrontations. Don’t stew in solitude, harboring a grudge over some slight. Deal with the person in a direct way, while being pleasant and understanding. Learn to think about problems from the other point of view. Not only will this help to prevent or resolve misunderstandings, but the practice will help your writing. Readers cheer for characters who don’t shy away from the tough talks. The best fiction writers take us into the minds of disagreeable characters in a convincing way.

5. Form and stick with good habits, break bad ones

Ah, human nature. So easy to break good habits and to start bad ones. I’ve blogged on this topic, too, and I still advocate a system of cues to trigger a good writing habit, and little self-bestowed rewards for completing the action.

6. Tackle that problem you’re putting off

We tend to ignore the elephant looming over us in the room. When a problem appears too difficult, we turn from it, fail to face it, hope it goes away. When it doesn’t go away, we make up reasons to neglect it. Then it nags us, causing guilt and more procrastination. Instead, face it and work the problem. If you can break it into parts, work on the biggest part first. That way, you’ll be closer to done than if you’d started small.

7. Seek joy in work, not external rewards

Why do you write? If you write for fame, fortune, or awards, then what will you do if those things elude you? Give up writing? Consider shifting your focus and find enjoyment in the act of writing itself. That source of joy will never desert you. It blazes from an internal fire, not an unreliable, external source like the other rewards.

8. Meditate

Leo Babauta recommends daily meditation. Set a quiet timer for two minutes or longer. Sit without moving while focusing on your breath. When thoughts wander away, bring your mind back to your breathing. This practice can calm your mood and strengthen your mental discipline.

Putting it all together

The word discipline comes from the Latin disciplina, meaning training, and from discipulus, meaning student. In the case of self-discipline, you’re the student and the teacher, and you’re training yourself.

What’s that I hear? The sound of one hand clapping for—

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What Was I Doing at ICON 49.5?

Last Saturday, I had a wonderful time at ICON 49.5. Most often held in Cedar Rapids, the Iowa Scifi Conference, or ICON, took place in Iowa City this year. Poised to celebrate their fiftieth anniversary in 2026, they decided to hold a one-day mini-conference this time, hence 49.5.

Book Signing

Conference organizers allowed me to set up at a table in the Iowa City Book Fair taking place the same day. For six hours, people stopped by to talk, look over my books, and buy some. I enjoyed sharing the table with Tricia Andersen, Darby Harn, and, later, Bree Moore. By watching these experienced authors, I learned more about how to do book signing events.

Indie Publishing Panel

To cap off the mini-conference, I spoke on the subject of Indie Publishing on a panel. Pictured from left to right are Tricia Andersen, Darby Harn, Bree Moore, me, and Rachel Aukes. By rights, I should have sat in the audience, because the other panelists seemed to have graduated summa cum laude from Indie Publishing University where I’d just enrolled as a freshman.

Gratitude

Still, I enjoyed the day’s experience and would like to thank not only the conference programming staff for allowing me to attend, but also my sister for accompanying me and helping me sell books. If there’s one writer who could really use the help, it’s—

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How to Bargain with Your Inner Critic

Have you held a sit-down with your inner critic? You know, that voice inside that’s always telling you you’re no good, that you shouldn’t raise your hand in class, that it’s safer to stand near the wall than to get out on the dance floor. Writers call that voice their “inner editor,” because it questions everything they write—the style, the organization, the spelling. The voice tells writers nobody will buy their stories and they should give up and pursue something else.

Scoff McGrouser, courtesy of Pixabay

Pros and Cons

I’ve portrayed the inner critic as bad, but it helps at times. An inner critic warned our ancient ancestors not to try befriending the saber-toothed tiger. Those who listened to their inner critic survived to pass it down to us as a useful survival trait. Today, the inner critic screams at you to stop when, while drunk, you tell your buddy, “Hold my beer and watch this.”

Though sometimes your inner critic prevents disaster, most of the time it urges against any action at all. It tells you you’re hopeless, useless, and unworthy.

Inner Critic vs. the First Draft

Writers who obey their inner critic without question never write anything.

However motivated the writer, however enthused about the project, the writer cannot get far if an inside voice declares the writing drivel, points out every missing comma, and lambasts the whole manuscript.

While creating a first draft, writers need freedom and confidence, not haranguing from a Debbie Downer. Nothing at this early point should hinder the flow or halt the momentum. Later, in subsequent drafts, the inner critic can prove its worth and let its editing prowess shine. If only you could give your inner critic a “time out” and banish it to its room. Hmm. Maybe you can.

By Name

Perhaps you can establish some control over this nagging inside voice. You could start by personalizing it. Give it a name. Activist Erin Brockovich calls hers “Negative Nancy.” I’ve heard Author Ines Johnson calls hers KeeKee.

I shall call mine Scoff McGrouser. What name will you give yours?

Now that you’ve humanized it, your inner critic now stands on your level, not like some mystical, all-powerful entity. You can talk to it. You can bargain on equal terms.

The Bargain

You’re writing a first draft and that familiar whiny voice pipes up, shattering your concentration and shaking your confidence. What can you do?

Address your inner critic by name, out loud if necessary (and if you’re alone). Be respectful and understanding. That critic, a permanent part of you, isn’t leaving your head. Tell it to take a break now. Be kind, but firm. Say you’ll be grateful for its help later. In subsequent drafts, it can critique to its heart’s content.

Evolving Relationship

Bargaining may not work the first time. You’re trying to break one habit and form another, and that requires persistence and patience. In time, you should find it easier to send the critic to a corner for a while.

In my case, I’ve learned to push Scoff McGrouser away long enough so I can write like—

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