Who Doesn’t Love a Story with a Map?

Isn’t it fun when a fiction book includes a map? If you’re like me, you linger over the map longer than you do any other page of the story. A map draws you in and makes you feel like you’re there, like you could use it to navigate from any spot to any other. As you read the story, you keep referring to the map to pinpoint the current action.

Maps of Others’ Stories

Sarah Laskow wrote a marvelous post about maps associated with fiction. Her article includes maps from The Swiss Family Robinson by Johann David Wyss, Walden; or, Life in the Woods by Henry David Thoreau, Treasure Island, by Robert Louis Stevenson, and others. Laskow discusses the reasons fiction writers make maps and their delight in drawing them.

Lincoln Island, from Jules Verne’s The Mysterious Island

Lincoln Island

Readers of this blog know I adore Jules Verne, so I couldn’t resist mentioning the map of Lincoln Island included in his book, The Mysterious Island. His characters explored every extent of it, and named the significant features as well as the island itself. You can’t help but follow along with the castaways by flipping back to the map to see where they are.

Map of The Seastead Chronicles

While writing my book, The Seastead Chronicles, I made a map to keep things straight. However, I did not include that map in the book.

The stories in the book take place in our near future as people colonize the seas. As they’ve done on land, they carve out nations with borders, but call the oceanic countries “aquastates,” and people cluster in cities, called seasteads.

On my map, I refrained from noting seastead locations. Unlike cities on land, some seasteads can move, though others are anchored in place. One or more aquastates consist of a single, mobile seastead that travels the world (or at least, wherever it can get permission to go).

Problems with Mapping Aquastates

Borders between aquastates need not consist of lines marking vertical planes, as they do on land. In one case, a single aquastate overlaps another and their borders in that region cut horizontally, with a depth separation. Two-dimensional maps don’t show that situation well.

I faced another problem—map projections. Most world maps emphasize land, since that’s where people live…today. However, you can slice the orange other ways, to emphasize the oceans. Therefore, I based my aquastate map on what’s called the Interrupted Goode Homolosine Oceanic View. That map projection carves through land masses so you can focus on the water.

Interrupted Goode Homolosine Oceanic View

Another difficulty lay in the fact that The Seastead Chronicles spans a period of almost a century. No single map would suffice for that entire time, due to the varying number, shape, and area of aquastates over the decades. In the early years, people set up lone aquastates with no neighbors. Then the water got more crowded. As more people migrated to the oceans, some aquastates failed and collapsed while others grew and spread. Near the year 2100, I supposed, things might stabilize when the cost of war or legal disputes exceeded the benefit to be gained from additional territory.

Want to See It?

Are you curious about what my aquastate map looks like? I’m not ready to release it to readers yet, but I will sometime soon. Sorry about the cruel tease, but some things must wait until all is in readiness for—

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Will Oceanism Become Your New Religion?

Sometimes science fiction authors create religions for their stories. According to Wikipedia, they do this to satirize, to propose better belief systems, to criticize real religions, to speculate on alien religions, to serve as stand-ins for real religions, or other reasons.

Examples

I could cite many cases of this, but I’m most familiar with the following:

  • Church of Science – Foundation (1951) by Isaac Asimov
  • Church of All Worlds – Stranger in a Strange Land (1961) by Robert A. Heinlein. Note: This book inspired the creation of a real religion by the same name.
  • Bokononism – Cat’s Cradle (1963) by Kurt Vonnegut
  • Bene Gesserit – Dune (1965) by Frank Herbert
  • Earthseed – Parable of the Sower (1993) and Parable of the Talents, (1998) by Octavia Butler

Oceanism

For my new book, The Seastead Chronicles, I created the religion of Oceanism. It begins with one man’s revelation and spreads through the seasteading community of aquastates. In some of the book’s stories, I mention certain aspects of Oceanism, but never describe it in full detail. Oceanism serves the purposes of the stories, not the other way around.

I don’t mean to make Oceanism sound like a fully-formed religion, complete in every aspect. Few writers, least of all me, would go to that much trouble. I created more features of it than appear in the stories, but not much more.

Aspects

All religions, even fictional ones, share certain basic attributes. Here’s how Oceanism addresses several of these aspects.

  • Belief in a higher power—For Oceanists, that’s their god: Oceanus.
  • Rules for living a virtuous life—Oceanists seek to obey the 5 Orders and avoid committing the 5 Sins
  • Sacred Texts—Oceanists call theirs the Tide.
  • Celebrations and Holidays—Oceanism recognizes five sacred days, evenly spaced through the year
  • Prayer and Meditation—Oceanism advocates daily meditation, while mostly immersed in water.
  • Rituals—Oceanists participate in the Five Life Events. Of these, Immersion is the most rigorous. During Immersion, adherents undergo permanent dying of their skin to some watery color, webbing of fingers and toes, inking of a forehead tattoo, and choosing an aqua-name.
  • Symbols and Iconography—the five-armed starfish serves as the main symbol of Oceanism, but adherents may choose any sea creature for their forehead tattoo. The number five contains special significance for Oceanists.
  • Sacred Spaces—Oceanism services take place in temples. There, worshippers wear bathing suits and sit in saltwater up to their necks.
  • Leaders who provide guidance—a High Priest leads the religion, with five pentapriests supporting him, and a hierarchy of priests supporting them.

Purpose

Earlier I cited several reasons authors create fictional religions. Oceanism exists to illustrate one of the ways cultures form in new environments. I imagined, if people moved to the sea in large numbers, new sea-based cultures would also arise and catch on, with new artforms, music, jargon, and religious sects. My stories make no judgements about the validity of Oceanism or any other religion. I leave religious satire and criticism to others.

Given what I’ve said about this religion, would you join with Oceanists? If not, does it sound plausible, at least? Feel free to leave a comment for—

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Does Your Fiction Book Need a Glossary? Does Mine?

Ever read a work of fiction and wish it included a glossary of the book’s unusual terms and names? Or do you think of glossaries as useless wastes?

In General

More common in nonfiction, glossaries sometimes appear in science fiction and fantasy books, to help readers orient to the unfamiliar world of a novel bristling with strange words and numerous proper nouns.  

Daniel J. Tortora posted a nice discussion of glossaries giving you everything you need to know.

Your Context-Free Slang Word Quiz

My new book, The Seastead Chronicles, lacks a glossary. I hope readers can pick up terms from context, without needing a reference section.

Readers might discern the meanings of many words even without context. For example, can you guess what the following seasteading slang words from my book might mean?

Here’s your list: blub-blub, blubbing, ebb-tide, flotz and jetz, fluke, kelpee, pelagic, squido, steader, tidal, and up-bubble. 

In the book, character actions and dialogue provide context as they use these terms. Even if you couldn’t guess meanings without reading the stories, you’d deduce them without pondering too hard.

While creating the world of my book, I assumed characters would create new slang as they moved to live in ocean-based cities. That seemed likely, since the phenomenon occurs whenever people relocate and settle in a new environment.

Quiz Answers

Ready to find out how well you did at guessing the meanings of my fictional seastead slang? Below, I’ve provided a part of the glossary that doesn’t appear in The Seastead Chronicles. I bet you came close, even without context, to the correct meanings for many of them.

Word/Phrase             Meaning

Blub-blub                   yada yada

Blubbing                    kidding, joking

Ebb-tide                     disappointing

Flotz and Jetz           nonsense (from flotsam and jetsam)

Fluke                          swear word/oath

Kelpee                       kelp tea

Pelagic                       out/away, as in “I’m going pelagic”

Squido                       crazy

Steader                      a resident of a seastead, also Seasteader

Tidal                           popular, viral

Up-bubble                 positive, enthusiastic

Grading Yourself

If you couldn’t guess many slang term meanings, I blame myself. I didn’t give you any background material, but readers of The Seastead Chronicles have all the context needed.

I think the book works well without a glossary, but that’s the biased opinion of—

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Want to Explore Leonardo’s Subterranean Secrets?

Who could have guessed Leonardo da Vinci left secrets underground?

Me, that’s who. First, here’s what really happened.

Reality

Sforza Castle, photographed by Jakub Halun, CC BY-SA 4.0, via Wikimedia Commons

In the 1490s, the duke of Milan, Ludovico Sforza, hired Leonardo to decorate Sforza Castle with artwork, and he complied. Since then, and down through the centuries, rumors persisted of hidden underground passages, secret corridors running beneath the castle.

Leonardo documented these tunnels, using his mirror-style writing. Much of his writings got combined into five notebooks, then bound into three volumes. English biographer John Forster (1812-1876) bequeathed the volumes to the Victoria and Albert Museum in London where they’ve been called the Codex Forster. Codex Forster 1 describes the mysterious tunnels beneath the castle.

Recently, Polytechnic University of Milan, the company Codevintec, and Sforza Castle teamed up and employed laser scanning and ground-penetrating radar to determine the truth about the rumored passages.

You guessed it. They found a network of subterranean corridors, just as da Vinci described. Read about their discovery here and here.

Fiction

In my story, Leonardo’s Lion, I extrapolated from a known truth about da Vinci. In 1515, he built a mechanical lion to entertain King Francis I of France and the monarch’s guests. My fictional tale takes place over half a century later, when Chev, a ten-year-old boy, discovers the lion in a royal storeroom. He’s able to operate it and even ride it, and soon embarks on a strange and dangerous mission. His quest leads him many leagues through a French countryside devastated by religious war. Chev finds Leonardo’s greatest secrets hidden underground, and these mysteries could affect the future of all humanity.

Reality Catching up with Fiction

It’s taken awhile for researchers to discover what I suspected when I wrote Leonardo’s Lion. Still, I must admit they didn’t find the underground vault mentioned in my tale, nor were the tunnels anywhere near my story’s location in France.

If you’re interested in exploring Leonardo’s secret underground mysteries, you can’t roam the passageways beneath Sforza Castle. To my knowledge, they haven’t been excavated yet. However, you can read my story. It’s available for purchase here.

A fiction writer with occasional flashes of clairvoyance, I’m—

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Cycling Through the World of Short Stories

What do you call a book-length collection of short stories? An anthology, a fix-up novel, or a short story cycle? Let’s explore the terms and see which applies to my recent book.

Definitions

For an anthology, a compiler or editor groups stories, poems, plays, or songs together. Often, they share a common theme, but the pieces need not have been written by the same author.

In a fix-up novel, individual short stories by the same author appear in the same novel. The author may have written them with no thought of grouping them later, so may have to alter (fix them up) to get them to fit well together.

When an author writes short stories intending to combine them later, we call that a short story cycle. In these books, each chapter stands alone as its own story, but fits with the others to tell a larger story.

What About The Seastead Chronicles?

My recent book contains short stories, all written by me. They all involve seasteads—permanent dwellings located at sea. When I began writing them, I did so out of fascination with the concept, hoping to get them published separately. As I wrote more, I dreamed about publishing them together. I began to visualize overall themes and an encompassing story arc. Therefore, I’d classify the book as a short story cycle.

I intended to tell the story of humankind moving to a new home, the sea. People have moved to new places before, and it changed them. When early humans spread across the world tens of thousands of years ago, they settled in various spots and developed different languages and cultures. When European-Americans spread to the western part of the American continent, they created new music and distinct ways of living.

In The Seastead Chronicles, I aimed to tell that story of how, when humans settle in a new place to change it, it also changes them. However, unlike the 19th Century conquering of the West, and unlike Ray Bradbury’s The Martian Chronicles, those who settled the oceans would not displace people or any sentient beings.

Some might think people who live in the oceans would kill and eat all the fish and other sea creatures. I didn’t see it that way. Modern economics negates the idea of hunting down and killing the last dodo. All animal species benefit if they serve some economic benefit to people, either as a food source, a tourist attraction, a sacred animal, or something else. People strive to preserve valuable animals and prevent their extinction.

Through my stories, I meant to convey the story of colonization, from tentative early attempts, the declaration of owned ocean sectors, the adverse reactions of land countries, the search for seabed mineral resources, the disputes and wars over territory, and the creation of a new culture with its own art, music, and religion.

Completing the Cycle

I’m working on novels now, and later books in the Seastead Chronicles series will take that form. Prior to this, I wrote short stories. I rarely wrote them in the same world or with the same characters as earlier stories. They each stood alone. But while writing the seastead tales, I came to regard them as related and part of a larger whole.

Moreover, I’ve created a world to explore. Each aquastate (nation in the ocean) comes with its own culture, resources, form of government, relations with neighboring aquastates, etc. Each gets populated by people from different land nations, with different motivations. That world gives me plenty of room for my imagination to craft stories of varying lengths, from short stories through novellas to novels.

For now, we begin exploring this world with The Seastead Chronicles, a short story cycle by—

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